Is Social Media Doing More Harm Than Good?

Before:

Social media is a necessity right now, like everyone already use it in their daily life. From the youngest person to the oldest person, from the poor man to the rich man. Because of social media everything right now is easy, easy to let others know about us, easy to see what others do, and also easy to comment about what others do. Moreover, from social media it also easy to make and spend money. So yes, social media harm or good it depends to whose use it. For the people who use it kindly, they can make something that very outstanding. And others who cannot use it, they can lost everything, like money, enery, and the most is time. Social media is also change the way how human communicate. Right now a lot of people choose social media to express they feeling. And also social media being a standard to everyone. Back again, we cannot against it, we must live with it in this century. So the thing that we can do is use it with wisely. 

After:

Social media has become a necessity in today’s world, as almost everyone uses it in their daily lives—from the youngest to the oldest, and from the poor to the rich. Social media has made many things easier, such as sharing our lives with others, seeing what others are doing, and even commenting on their activities. Additionally, social media has become a platform for both making and spending money.

Whether social media does more harm than good depends on how it is used. For those who use it responsibly, social media can lead to remarkable achievements. However, for those who misuse it, social media can result in significant losses, including money, energy, and most importantly, time.

Social media has also changed the way humans communicate. Nowadays, many people prefer to express their feelings through social media instead of face-to-face interactions. Furthermore, social media has become a new standard for society, influencing how people view themselves and others.

In the end, we cannot avoid social media; it is an integral part of our lives in this century. The best we can do is to use it wisely, ensuring that it benefits us rather than harms us.